here are some ads and a redesign of my package.
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- JustinB13
- An aspiring graphic designer that wants to do more.
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I like #1 and #4 for your ad thumbnails. I also like your cover but try to blend in the cityscape with the cover.
The cityscape cover emits a nice, positive energy but also seems to be limited by the heavy Gothic black letter typeface. Build upon your concept of "unleashing your imagination" for the ad.
i like the concept of the fingers creating a frame. i'm interested in how you make the product stand out, whehter its glowing or whatever. The cover-- Im not really feelin the type. It looks like something you would use for a heavy meatl flyer or something. the background is clearly starwars or some other movie. why not craete your own citysacpe?
Honestly I kinda like your original concepts better I think you just needed to play with the color palette a little more. But this is nice too. I agree with Nick the type is not working. As far as your ad concepts go The hands as a frame are very interesting but I'm not sure if the box should be so close to the hands. Its a little hard to see so I could be making an incorrect comment, but I think it should be like if a person was doing that in real life. Sometimes the whole subject doesn't fit within the finger frame or its small and far away. Think about it.
Kim Jensen
I like #1 for the ad thumbnail. But the cover for the software isnt really working for me. Maybe use a high contrast picture so that the strokes on top of it stand out.
I like how your cityscape has that oil painting feel to it but then it makes the text feel too clean on top of it. Maybe try giving the type an oil painting texture or something? The ad with the hands making the windows sounds neat - I would go in that direction.
I like the cityscape but I think I would change the font it looks a little scary almost like it would be on the cover of a game and not software.
The image makes me think of a game like Sim City or something? The font isn't really working either...I like the black and purple box you had before, but maybe changing the colors.
For ads the first one I'm liking, it's interesting to look at and original.
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