Lets start with the business card. I like the design on the back of the business card. The one with the black background. Well done. It's unique and also stands out. I'm not too sure about the backside where you have the information though. I think the type is too far apart. In my opinion it will look more professional if you eliminate the extra negative space between the type. Also for the placement of the logo, I would align it with one of the elements. Maybe move it back to align it with the name!
For the Letterhead! It's a unique design. I like it. I can't recall seeing anything similar to it. Good job. But I would probably make the circle smaller and also change the orange outline to the same color as the red on the logo to help them unite better.
Envelope. I think the design is working. The alignment is helping the composition to have a better balance. I would also change the outline of the circle to red rather than orange to again help the design unite.
I like the cropping on the back of the business card. The red, black, and white color combo is working very well. But I feel like the front of the card was put together last minute. It seems like you just put some type and laid the logo on an open space. Play with the layout and movement. The letterhead is very simple. Its effective but the ring is beginning to look like a coffee stain. Same with the envelope. You might not have to use a ring. Try just using the texture of the ring as a brush.
I really like the back of the business card. I like the cropping of the logo and I could totally see it printer. The front im kind of having a problem with the text. I think its too light and also te information is too seperated. On the letter head, I like the cropping of the logo as well, but Im not sure i like the placement. Maybe the bottom right or left would be more better.
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Great job overall.
Lets start with the business card. I like the design on the back of the business card. The one with the black background. Well done. It's unique and also stands out. I'm not too sure about the backside where you have the information though. I think the type is too far apart. In my opinion it will look more professional if you eliminate the extra negative space between the type. Also for the placement of the logo, I would align it with one of the elements. Maybe move it back to align it with the name!
For the Letterhead! It's a unique design. I like it. I can't recall seeing anything similar to it. Good job. But I would probably make the circle smaller and also change the orange outline to the same color as the red on the logo to help them unite better.
Envelope. I think the design is working. The alignment is helping the composition to have a better balance. I would also change the outline of the circle to red rather than orange to again help the design unite.
Well done over all. :)
Hedyeh
I like the cropping on the back of the business card. The red, black, and white color combo is working very well. But I feel like the front of the card was put together last minute. It seems like you just put some type and laid the logo on an open space. Play with the layout and movement. The letterhead is very simple. Its effective but the ring is beginning to look like a coffee stain. Same with the envelope. You might not have to use a ring. Try just using the texture of the ring as a brush.
I really like the back of the business card. I like the cropping of the logo and I could totally see it printer. The front im kind of having a problem with the text. I think its too light and also te information is too seperated. On the letter head, I like the cropping of the logo as well, but Im not sure i like the placement. Maybe the bottom right or left would be more better.
Lucineh :]
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